New skills I am trying to incorporate into my paper is trying to not repeat myself as much with the main topic because I know I have done it a lot in past essays. Also I need to make my thesis statement more clear or put it in the right area because I will sometimes put a good thesis statement in some random paragraph and then the thesis I will use in the first paragraph will be really bad. My revision goals for this paper is to take all the comments I got back from my peers and really do everything they said I should and try to make this essay the best I can. The steps I plan to take is 1 go over all the feedback I got back, 2 start to write the final draft while also going back to my notes from my peers, 3 once I have finished my final draft have one of my roommates or friends read my paper and see if they think I can make any changes, and finally turn it in. My biggest challenge is definitely going to make sure I do everything my peers told me to do and change everything I need to because sometimes I think stuff is fine the way it is even though it isn’t. If this problem does occur I am going to take a deep breath and ask someone around me for help or advice because I do not just wanna ignore the problem.